Pricing
The Manuscript Diagnostic System is only $279 for lifetime access.
This is a one-time payment.
Lifetime access.
No subscription. No renewal.
What You'll Get Access To
Four Core Diagnostic Classes:
Show vs. Tell Misdiagnosis: Diagnosing Summary, Dramatization, and Structural Weaknesses
Description and Reader Orientation: Anchoring Time, Space, and Context with Precision
Point of View and Narrative Access: Diagnosing Distance, Control, and Perspective
Scene Purpose & Change: Identifying Movement, Escalation, and Narrative Shift
Also Included:
Structured diagnostic decision trees
Reusable revision frameworks
Lifetime access to all Tier 1 materials
The Manuscript Diagnostic System gives you a structured way to identify what’s not working — and why — so you stop revising blindly.
Fit Check
This is a good fit if you:
Want to understand why revision advice keeps conflicting
Are tired of fixing the wrong thing
Want tools you can reuse on every manuscript
This may not be a fit if you:
Want line-by-line critique right now
Are looking for genre formulas
Aren’t ready to revise yet
Write picture books or early chapter books
You’re not committing to a long program.
You’re not locking yourself into an upsell path.
You’re gaining a diagnostic framework you can use immediately — and reuse indefinitely.
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